New Narrative

We have decided to amend our narrative as we felt the previous narrative was not going to work as well in a short film. We felt there were too many little parts needed in order for it to make sense to the audience, and would've needed more than five minutes to include the story, as well as the conventions of horror films. This is our new narrative.


After sometime the younger brother notices that one of their kids toys, a Golliwog, starts to appear in random areas around the house. The younger brother thinks it's his brother playing a little joke on him, so he confronts him. The older brother denies even knowing what a golliwog is and continues to watch TV. The youngest brother refuses to accept this but moves on with his day. 

A day or so later, the two brothers leave the house to play football. As they get in the car, the golliwog is watching them from the upstairs window. Whilst they are not home, the golliwog moves into a new place so when the brothers see it, they realise neither of them had been home to have moved it.

The brothers notice that the golliwog is moving much more frequently, and the two brothers begin to get scared and worried. They decide to throw the golliwog away but as they put it in the bin, the golliwog begins to laugh. the brothers understandably get creeped out, but as its in the bin they aren't too worried.

The next day, the golliwog is back in the living room, just sat on the sofa. The two brothers are once again concerned so they decide to throw it out in the big green bin outside. As the brothers go back inside, they lid of the bin opens and the golliwog laughs once again.